"That day passed and the night. The next day the wind shifted west, and the air was dark and gloomy." I chose this as my passage because i think it shows the picture well and helps paint the picture in my mind. I can understand what's happening more because i can imagine what's happening.
"Now the days passed slowly and wearily. Many of the dwarves spent their time piling and ordering the treasure; and now Thorin spoke of the Arkenstone of Thrain, and bade them eagerly to look for it in every corner." I think this is a good passage because with detail, it describes what's happening. I can visualize what the author was imagining and it helps me understand the story better.
No comments:
Post a Comment